I feel really bad, but...I have to agree. Didn't get very far because it was difficult to read. And I mean 10 minutes, that was it.If you guys need help with grammar and whatnot, I'd be willing to help since I have some experience with renpy. This looks like a super good game, the grammar unfortunately makes it unreadable. It was a waste of money for me because I couldn't read it. If you are charging money for this game, you honestly need to fix it.
I haven't played this yet, but judging from the previous comment, I'm less inclined to now because I'm a huge grammar freak.
If you guys need a proofreader, I'd be up for the job! I'm not a native speaker, but I've lived in the US most of my life and consider myself pretty fluent in English.
Wow, I bought this and I was really excited to play but... the grammar is terrible. I couldn't keep playing because it's so hard to read. And I'm not even an English native speaker, so... I'm really disappointed.
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I feel really bad, but...I have to agree. Didn't get very far because it was difficult to read. And I mean 10 minutes, that was it.If you guys need help with grammar and whatnot, I'd be willing to help since I have some experience with renpy. This looks like a super good game, the grammar unfortunately makes it unreadable. It was a waste of money for me because I couldn't read it. If you are charging money for this game, you honestly need to fix it.
I haven't played this yet, but judging from the previous comment, I'm less inclined to now because I'm a huge grammar freak.
If you guys need a proofreader, I'd be up for the job! I'm not a native speaker, but I've lived in the US most of my life and consider myself pretty fluent in English.
Wow, I bought this and I was really excited to play but... the grammar is terrible. I couldn't keep playing because it's so hard to read. And I'm not even an English native speaker, so... I'm really disappointed.