I feel really bad, but...I have to agree. Didn't get very far because it was difficult to read. If you guys need help with grammar and whatnot, I'd be willing to help since I have some experience with renpy. This looks like a super good game, the grammar unfortunately makes it unreadable.
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux
A story set at a strange town which is always night with dreams of the citizens displayed at the wall of the buildings and one girl who lived inside it. The girl wandered around the town almost aimlessly until two travellers came to that town, both brought their own purposes. As the story went, each of the characters’ motive became clear including the girl herself.
- 2 Routes + 1 Extra Story after completing one of the routes
- 10 Endings (6 Bad Endings and 2 Endings for each route.)
- 9 CG art
- Heroine : A girl who lived all alone only with her cat in the strange town. Her real name will be revealed in one of the route and certain endings.
- Cyrill : A mysterious traveller, his objective is unknown.
- Haines : Another mysterious traveller.
There are only 2 routes at this VN, but please play Haines' route first or there will be a missing scene at Cyrill's.
Art : drye
Story : QC
SFX : http://www.freesfx.co.uk
In order to download this game you must purchase it at or above the minimum price of $1 USD. You will get access to the following files:
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I haven't played this yet, but judging from the previous comment, I'm less inclined to now because I'm a huge grammar freak.
If you guys need a proofreader, I'd be up for the job! I'm not a native speaker, but I've lived in the US most of my life and consider myself pretty fluent in English.
Wow, I bought this and I was really excited to play but... the grammar is terrible. I couldn't keep playing because it's so hard to read. And I'm not even an English native speaker, so... I'm really disappointed.